Chapter 21 Chapter 21 Who in the rainbow can draw the line where the violet tint ends and the orange tint begins? Distinctly Wewe see the difference of the colors, but where exactly does the one first blendingly enter into the other? So with sanity and insanity. In pronounced cases there is no question about them. But Inin some supposed cases, in various degrees, supposedly less pronounced, to draw the exact line of demarkationdemarkation] HM's spelling is a noted variant of "demarcation" (OED). few will undertake (no comma in MS)undertake,undertake,] The word "undertake" appears, without a comma, as the last word of the last line of the MS leaf. In revision, HM added the following though-clause in a bubble at the top margin, with a pencil line down the right margin, indicating its proper placement after "undertake." However, HM neglected to add the necessary comma joining the two. Thothough for a fee becoming considerate some professional experts will. There is nothing nameable but that some men will or undertake toor undertake to] As with the preceding though-clause, HM inserted the final sentence of this paragraph in the top margin of the MS leaf, but in this case did not draw any insertion device as to the sentence's placement. In a bubble, he also added "or undertake to" after "will" without punctuation. The sentence itself repeats the previous sentence, and Melville seems to be trying out variant wordings for a single thought, which, in a latter stage he might have combined into one smoother sentence. As it stands, the two sentences are difficult to read but are no more readable through editorial intervention, and MEL does not emend. do it for pay. Whether Captain Vere, as the Surgeon professionally &and privilyprivily] HS and NN decipher HM's inscription for this word as "privately." surmised, was really the sudden victim of any degree of aberationaberration, every one must determine for himself by such light as the narrative may afford. ThatThat] Melvllle's original sentence opener, in ink, introduces the that-clause that now opens the paragraph. In deleting his original opener, Melville inadvertently deleted the necessary "that" for his revised sentence. MEL restores and capitalizes "That" to give the sentence its intended coherence. Thethe unhappy event which has been narrated could not have happened at a worse juncture, was but too true. For it was close on the heel of the suppressed insurrections, an after-time very critical to naval authority, demanding from every English sea-commander two qualities not readily interfusable—prudence and rigor. Moreover there was something crucial in the case. In the jugleryjuglery] NN emends to "jugglery." Since HM's spelling is a recorded variant of "jugglery" (OED), MEL does not emend. of circumstances preceedingpreceding and attending the event on board the Indomitable and in the light of that martial code whereby it was formally to be judged, innocenseinnocence and guilt personified in Claggart and Budd in effect changed places. In a legal view the apparent victim of the tragedy, was he who had sought to victimize a man blameless; and the indisputable deed of the latter, navally regarded, constituted the most heinous of military crimes. Yet more. The essential right and wrong involved in the matter, the clearer that might be, so much the worse for the responsibility of a loyal sea-commander inasmuch as he was not authorized to determine the matter on that primitive basis. Small wonder then that the Indomitable's captain though in general a man of rapid decision, felt that circumspectness not less than promptitude was necessary. Until he could decide upon his course, and in each detail; and not only so, but until the concluding measure was upon the point of being enacted, he deemed it advisable, in view of all the circumstances to guard as much as possible against publicity. Here he may or may not have erred. Certain it is however that (no commas in MS)it is, however, that subsequently in the confidential talk of more than one or two gun-rooms and cabins he was not a little criticized by some officers, a fact imputed by his friends and vehemently by his cousin Jack Denton to professional jealousy of Starry Vere. Some imaginative ground for invidious comment there was. The maintenance of secresysecrecy in the matter, the confining all knowledge of it for a time to the place where the homocidehomicide occurred, the quarter-deck cabin; in these particulars lurked some resemblance to the policy adopted in those tragedies of the palace which have occurred more than once in the capital founded by Peter the Barbarian. The case indeed was such that fain would the Indomitable's captain have deferred taking any action whatever respecting it further than to keep the foretopman a close prisoner till the ship re- -joinedre-joined the squadron and then submitting the matter to the judgementjudgement] MEL retains HM's British spelling. of his Admiral.Admiral,Admiral,] Originally, Melville continued his sentence with the "apprising him" clause that follows. Later, he deleted the clause tentatively in pencil, and then completed the deletion in ink, placing a period after Admiral to indicate the new ending of his sentence. However, Melville later restored the deleted lines by underlining it in pencil. HS and NN do not acknowledge the restoration. MEL restores the deleted clause and emends the period after Admiral to a comma. apprising him how far was the foretopman at heart from being either a mutineer or a murderer. But a true military officer is in one particular like a true monk. Not with more of self-abnegation will the latter keep his vows of monastic obedianceobedience than the former his vows of allegiance to martial duty. Feeling that unless quick action was taken on it, the deed of the foretopman, so soon as it should be known on the gun-decks would tend to awaken any slumbering embers of the Nore among the crew, a sense of the urgency of the case overruled in Captain Vere every other consideration. But tho'though a conscientious disiplinariandisciplinarian he was no lover of authority for mere authority's sake. Very far was he from embracing opportunities for monopolizing to himself the perils of moral responsibility (no comma in MS)responsibility,responsibility,] MEL adds a comma to set off the following clause. none at least that could properly be referred to an official superior or shared with him by his official equals or even subordinates. So thinking (no comma in MS)thinking,thinking,] MEL adds the comma to set off the introductory adverbial phrase. he was glad it would not be at variance with usage to turn the matter over to a summary court of his own officers, reserving to himself as the one on whom the ultimate accountability would rest, the right of maintaining a supervision of it, or formally or informally interposing at need. Accordingly a drum-head court was summarily convened, he electing the individuals composing it, the First Lieutenant, the captain of marines, and the Sailing Master. In associating an officer of marines with the sea-lieutenantssea-lieutenants] A telling textual problem involves an uncompleted revision having to do with the jury for Vere’s drumhead court. In an early pencil draft, preserved on the verso of another manuscript leaf, HM had designated four members of the jury, including the First Lieutenant and “a lieutenant of minor grade” (leaf image 198; leaf 260a). Eventually, he pared the jury down to three officers: the First Lieutenant, the sailing master, and the “captain of marines,” which he added, in pencil, in place of the minor-grade or junior lieutenant (leaf image 579; leaf 245). However, HM neglected to make further revisions to references he had earlier made to multiple lieutenants. One remnant of this uncompleted revision is the plural “sea-lieutenants” here. HS emends to the singular, conforming to HM’s removal of the minor lieutenant, and adds "and the sailing master." NN simply emends to "sea-lieutenant." In representing HM’s revision process as it appears in manuscript, MEL does not emend here and in two other sites. (See "junior Lieutenant" and “Lieutenant” below.) in a case having to do with a sailor (no comma in MS)sailor,sailor,] MEL emends by adding a comma here to indicate the end of the long introductory participial phrase. NN does not emend. the Commander perhaps deviated from general custom. He was prompted thereto by the circumstance that he took that soldier to be a judicious person, thoughtful, and not altogether incapable of grappling with a difficult case unprecedented in his prior experience. Yet even as to him he was not without some latent misgiving, for withall he was an extremely good-natured man, an enjoyer of his dinner (no serial comma in MS)dinner, a sound sleeper, and inclined to obesity.obesity,obesity,] Originally, Melville concluded his description of the captain of marines here, placing a period after "obesity," but in a later stage, he inserted an expansion in pencil, and MEL adds the comma here to accommodate the inserted text. mana mana man] Melville originally began his penciled insertion with "The sort of man," but in deleting "That sort of," he neglected to supply the necessary indefinite article for "man.' who tho'though he would always maintain his manhood in battle might not prove altogether reliable in a moral dilemma involving aught of the tragic. As to the First Lieutenant and the Sailing Master (no comma in MS)Master, Captain Vere could not but be aware that though honest natures, of approved gallantry upon occasion (no comma in MS)occasion,occasion,] MEL adds a comma to clarify the object of "upon occasion." their intelligence was mostly confined to the matter of active seamanship and the fighting demands of their profession. The court was held in the same cabin where the unfortunate affair had taken place. This cabin, the Commander's, embraced the entire area under the poop-deck. Aft, and on either side was a small state-room (no comma in MS)state-room, the one now temporarily a jail &and the other a dead-house and a yet smaller compartment leaving a space between, expanding foreward into a goodly oblong of length coinciding with the ship's beam. A sky-light of moderate dimension was overhead and at each end of the oblong space were two sashed port-hole windows easily convertableconvertible back into embrasures for short carronades. All being quickly in readiness, Billy Budd was arraigned, Captain Vere necessarily appearing as the sole witness in the case, and as such temporarily sinking his rank, though singularly maintaining it in a matter apparently trivial, namely, that he testified from the ship's weather-side with that object having caused the court to sit on the lee-side. Concisely he narrated all that had led up to the catastrophe, omitting nothing in Claggart's accusation and deposing as to the manner in which the prisoner had received it. At this testimony the three officers glanced with no little surprise at Billy Budd, the last man they would have suspected either of the mutinous design alleged by Claggart or the undeniable deed he himself had done. The First Lieutenant taking judicial primacy and turning toward the prisoner, said, "Captain Vere has spoken. Is it or is it not as Captain Vere says?" In responceresponse came syllables not so much impeded in the utterance as might have been anticipated. They were these: "Captain Vere tells the truth. It is just as Captain Vere says, but it is not as the Master-at-Arms said. I have eaten the King's bread and I am true to the King." "I beleivebelieve you, my man [quote] (no comma in MS)man," said the witness (no comma in MS)witness, his voice indicating a suppressed emotion not otherwise betrayed. "God will bless you for that, Your Honor!" not without stammering said Billy, and all but broke down. But immediatlyimmediately was recalled to self-control by another question, to which with the same emotional difficulty of utterance he said (no comma in MS)said, "No, there was no malice between us. I never bore malice against the Master-at-arms. I am sorry that he is dead. I did not mean to kill him. Could I have used my tongue I would not have struck him. But he foulyfoully lied to my face and in prescencepresence of my Captain, and I had to say something, and I could only say it with a blow, God help me!" In the impulsive above-board manner of the frank one the court saw confirmed all that was implied in words that just previously had perplexed them, coming as they did from the testifier to the tragedy and promptly following Billy's impassioned disclaimer of mutinous intent—Captain Vere's words, "I believe you, my man." Next it was asked of him whether he knew of or suspected aught savoring of incipient trouble (meaning mutiny, tho'though the explicit term was avoided) going on in any section of the ship's company. The reply lingered. This was naturally imputed by the court to the same vocal embarrassment which had retarded or obstructed previous answers. But in main it was otherwise here; the question immediatlyimmediately recalling to Billy's mind the interview with the Afterguardsman in the fore-chains. But an innate repugnance to playing a part at all approaching that of an informer against one's own shipmates—the same erring sense of uninstructed honor which had stood in the way of his reporting the matter at the time though as a loyal man-of-war-man (no 's in MS)man-of-war's-man it was incumbent on him and failure so to do (no comma in MS)do,do,] MEL adds a comma to clarify HM's nested clauses. if charged against him and proven, would have subjected him to the heaviest of penalties; this, with the blind feeling now his, that nothing really was being hatched, prevailed with him. When the answer came it was a negative. "One question more," said the officer of marines now first speaking and with a troubled earnestness, "You tell us that what the Master-at-Arms said against you was a lie. Now why should he have so lied, so maliciously lied, since you declare there was no malice between you?" At that question unintentionally touching on a spiritual sphere wholly obscure to Billy's thoughts, he was nonplussed, evincing a confusion indeed that some observers, such as can readily be imagined, would have construed into involuntary evidence of hidden guilt. Nevertheless he strove some way to answer, but all at once relinquished the vain endeavor, at the same time turning an appealing glance towards Captain Vere as deeming him his best helper and friend. Captain Vere who had been seated for a time rose to his feet, addressing the interrogator. "The question you put to him,himhim] MEL removes an undeleted comma, the remnant of an uncompleted deletion. comes naturally enough. But how can he rightly answer it? or anybody else? unless indeed it be he who lies within there{quote] (no comma in MS)there," designating the compartment where lay the corpse. "But the prone one there will not rise to our summons. In effect tho'though, as it seems to me, the point you make is hardly material. Quite aside from any conceivable motive actuating the Master-at-arms, and irrespective of the provocation to the blow, a martial court must needs in the present case confine its attention to the blow's consequceconsequence, which consequceconsequence justly is to be deemed not otherwise than as the striker's deed." This utterance (no comma in MS)utterance, the full significance of which it was not at all likely that Billy took in, nevertheless caused him to turn a wistful interrogative look toward the speaker, a look in its dumb expressiveness not unlike that which a dog of generous breed might turn upon his master seeking in his face some elucidation of a previous gesture ambiguous to the canine intelligence. Nor was the same utterance without marked effect upon the three officers, more especially the soldier. Couched in it seemed to them a meaning unanticipated, involving a prejudgementprejudgement] MEL preserves Melville's British spelling. on the speaker's part. It served to augment a mental disturbance previously evident enough. The soldier once more spoke; in a tone of suggestive dubiety addressing at once his associates and Captain Vere: "Nobody is present—none of the ship's company, I mean, who might shed lateral light, if any is to be had, upon what remains mysterious in this matter." "That is thoughtfully put[quote] (no comma in MS)put," said Captain Vere; "I see your drift. Ay, there is a mystery; but, to use a Scriptural phrase, it is [double-quote]a'a mystery of iniquity[double-quote],iniquity,' a matter for psychologic theologians to discuss. But what has a military court to do with it? Not to add that for us any possible investigation of it is cut off by the lasting tongue-tie of—him—in yonder," again designating the mortuary state-room. The (no quote mark in MS)"The prisoner's deed,—with that alone we have to do." To this, and particularly the closing reitterationreiteration, the marine soldier knowing not how aptly to reply, sadly abstained from saying aught. The First Lieutenant who at the outset had not unnaturally assumed primacy in the court, now overrulingly instructed by a glance from Captain Vere, a glance more effective than words, resumed that primacy. Turning to the prisoner, "Budd," he said, and scarse in equable tones, "Budd, if you have aught further to say for yourself, say it now." Upon this the young sailor turned another quick glance toward Captain Vere; then, as taking a hint from that aspect, a hint confirming his own instinct that silence was now best, replyedreplied to the LieutenantLieutenant, "I have said all, Sir." The marine—the same who had been the sentinel without the cabin-door at the time that the foretopman followed by the master-at-arms, entered it—he, standing by the sailor throughout these judicial proceedings, was now directed to take him back to the after compartment originally assigned to the prisoner and his custodian. As the twain disappearddisappeared from view, the three officers as partially liberated from some inward constraint associated with Billy's mere prescencepresence, simultaniouslysimultaneously stirred in their seats. They exchanged looks of troubled indecision, yet feeling that decide they must and without long delay. For Captain Vere, he for the time (sitting) / stoodstoodstood] Melville deleted "stood" in pencil and inserted above it "(sitting)" with uncharacteristic parentheses. Perhaps this apparent insertion is not so much a revision as Melville's note to himself to consider having Vere be seated. Since it is clear in what follows in the paragraph that Vere is standing—he looks out a porthole with his back to the jury then turns—MEL restores the deleted "stood" as the only viable option in this uncompleted revision.unconciuslyunconsciously with his back toward them, apparently in one of his absent fits, gazing out from a sashed port-hole to windward upon the monotonous blank of the twilight sea. But the court's silence continuing, broken only at moments by brief consultations, in low earnest tones, this served to arouse him and energize him. Turning, he to-and-fro paced the cabin athwart; in the returning ascent to windward, climbing the slant deck in the ship's lee roll; without knowing it symbolizing thus in his action a mind resolute to surmount difficulties even if against primitive instincts strong as the wind and the sea. Presently he came to a stand before the three. After scanning their faces he stood less as mustering his thoughts for expression, than as one inly deliberating how best to put them to well-meaning men not intellectually mature, men with whom it was necessary to demonstrate certain principles that were axioms to himself. Similar impatience as to talking is perhaps one reason that deters some minds from addressing any popular assemblies. When speak he did, something both in the substance of what he said and his manner of saying it, showed the influence of unshared studies modifying and tempering the practical training of an active career. This, along with his phraseology (no comma in MS)phraseology, now and then was suggestive of the grounds whereon rested that imputation of a certain pedantry socially alleged against him by certain naval men of wholly practical cast, captains, who nevertheless would frankly concede that His Magesty'sMajesty's navy mustered no more efficient officer of their grade than Starry Vere. What he said was to this effect: "Hitherto I have been but the witness, little more; and I should hardly think now to take another tone, that of your coadjutor for the time, did I not perceive in you,—at the crisis too——a troubled hesitancy, proceeding, I doubt not from the clash of military duty with moral scruple—scruple vitalized by compassion. For the compassion, howcompassion, How ] Originally, HM wrote "That compassion is natural. How can I otherwise than share it." In revision, he attempted to combine the two sentences into one, with something like "For the compassion, how can I otherwise than share it." However, in MS, the revision is not completed: the period after "compassion" is not deleted; and "How" remains capitalized. MEL emends by supplying a comma and decapitalizing How. can I otherwise than share it. But, mindful of paramount obligations I strive against scruples that may tend to enervate decision. Not, gentlemen, that I hide from myself that the case is is (doubled is in MS)is an exceptional one. SpeculativlySpeculatively regaudedregarded, it well might be referred to a jury of casuists. But for us here acting not as casuists or moralists, it is a case practical, and under martial law practically, (comma in MS)practicallypractically] In pencil, Melville had placed a comma after "practically," and inserted "not speculativly" above. He then deleted that phrase, neglecting to delete the penciled comma. Since the comma is a remnant of the uncompleted revision, MEL deletes it. to be dealt with. But Youryour scruples: do they move as in a dusk? Challenge them. Make them advance and declare themselves. Come now: do they import something like this: If, mindless of palliating circumstances, we are bound to regard the death of the Master-at-arms as the prisoner's deed, then does that deed constitute a capital crime whereof the penalty is a mortal one. But in natural justice is nothing but the prisoner's overt act to be considered? How can we adjudge to summary and shameful death a fellow-creature innocent before God, and whom we feel to be so?—Does that state it aright? You sign sad assent. Well, I too feel that, the full force of that. It is Nature. But do these buttons that we wear attest that our allegiance is to Nature? No, to the King. Though the ocean, which is inviolate Nature primeval, tho'though this be the element where we move and have our being as sailors, yet as the King's officers lies our duty in a sphere correspondingly natural? So little is that true, that in receiving our commissions we in the most important regards ceased to be natural free-agents. When war is declared are we the commissioned fighters previously consulted? We fight at command. If our judgements approve the war, that is but coincidence. So in other particulars. So now. For suppose condemnation to follow these present proceedings. Would it be so much we ourselves that would condemn as it would be martial law operating through us? For that law and the rigour of it, we are not responsible. Our vowed responsibility is in this: that however pitilessly that law may operate in any instancesany instances] Originally, Melville wrote "certain instances" in ink, but later deleted the phrase in pencil, inserting "the present case" above the deleted "certain." In further revision, he deleted "the present case" and added "any" after "certain" but neglected to restore "instances," leaving his revision at this site uncompleted, as "in any." A possible completion of Melville's revision is "in any case"; however, rather than adding that word, MEL restores "instances." NN emends to "instance.", we nevertheless adhere to it and administer it. But (no quote in MS)"But the exceptional in the matter moves the hearts within you. Even so too is mine moved. But let not warm hearts betray heads that should be cool. Ashore in a criminal case (no comma in MS)case,case,] MEL adds a comma to signal that the following clause does not modify "will" and that "will" marks the beginning of a question. will an upright judge allow himself off the bench to be waylaid by some tender kinswoman of the accused seeking to touch him with her tearful plea? Well (no comma in MS)Well, the heart here sometimes the feminine in man is as that pitious woman., (undeleted period in MS)woman,woman,] Originally, "sometimes the feminine in man," appeared in the following clause. In revision, Melville transposed the phrase to its current position and combined the sentence ending with "woman" with the clause that follows. In doing so, Melville retained the comma here but neglected to delete the original period after "woman." and hard tho'though it be she must here be ruled out." He paused, earnestly studying them for a moment; then resumed. "But something in your aspect seems to urge that it is not solely the heart that moves in you, but also the conscience, the private conscience. But tell me whether or not, occupying the position we do, private conscience should not yeildyield to that imperial one formulated in the code under which alone we officially proceed?" Here the three men moved in their seats, less convinced than agitated by the course of an argument troubling but the more the spontaniousspontaneous conflict within. PercievingPerceiving which, the speaker paused for a moment; then abruptly changing his tone, went on. "To steady us a bit, let us recur to the facts.—In war-time at sea a man-of-war's-man strikes his superior in grade, and the blow kills. Apart from its effect the blow itself is, according to the Articles of War, a capital crime. Furthermore—" "Ay, Sir," emotionally broke in the officer of marines, "in one sense it was. But surely Budd purposed neither mutiny nor homocidehomicide." "Surely not, my good man. And before a court less arbitrary and more merciful than a martial one, that plea would largetylargely extenuate. At the Last Assizes it shall acquit. But how here? We proceed under the law of the Mutiny Act. In feature no child can resemble his father more than that Act resembles in spirit the thing from which it derives—War. In His MagestyMajesty's service—in this ship indeed—there are Englishmen forced to fight for the King against their will. Against their conscience, for aught we know. Tho'Though as their fellow-creatures some of us may appreciate their position, yet as navy officers what reck we of it? Still less recks the enemy. Our impressed men he would fain cut down in the same swath with our volunteers. As regards the enemy's naval conscripts, some of whom may even share our own abhorrence of the regicidal French Directory, it is the same on our side. War looks but to the frontage, the appearance. And the Mutiny Act, War's child, takes after the father. Budd's intent or non-intent is nothing to the purpose. But"But while, put to it by those anxitiesanxieties in you which I can not but respect, I only repeat myself—while thus strangely we prolong proceedings that should be summary—the enemy may be sighted and an engagement result. We must do; and one of two things must we do—condemn or let go." "Can we not convict and yet mitigate the penalty?" asked the junior Lieutenantjunior Lieutenant] Melville seems to misidentify the speaker here. As noted earlier—see “sea-lieutenants” above—he had revised the membership of Vere’s three-officer jury, replacing a “lieutenant of minor grade” with the captain of marines. But Melville neglected to revise this reference to the “junior Lieutenant.” Because the officer designated here is “speaking ... for the first [time],” and because the only juror who has not spoken is the sailing master, HS and NN emend “junior Lieutenant” to "the sailing master" and "the Sailing Master," respectively. With the idea of representing Melville’s uncompleted revision process in its documentary state, MEL retains this discrepancy and does not emend. (See also "Lieutenant" below.) here speaking, and falteringly, for the first. "LieutenantLieutenant] Identifying the speaker in the preceding sentence as “junior Lieutenant,” Melville has Vere responding by addressing of the third juror as “Lieutenant.” Both references are remnants of an earlier stage of composition in which the jury included two lieutenants. Just as Melville neglected to complete his revision by altering “junior Lieutenant,” he also left Vere’s mode of address unrevised. To correct the oversight, HS emends "Lieutenant" to "Gentlemen," altering the form of address from singular to plural and giving the impression that Vere now addresses the entire jury. However, NN preserves the singular by emending to “My man.” MEL retains the uncompleted revision and does not emend., were that clearly lawful for us under the circumstances (no comma in MS)circumstances, consider the consequences of such clemency. The people" (meaning the ship's company) "have native-sensenative-sense] HM originally wrote "mother-sense" in ink. Later, he instructed his wife ESM to revise "mother-sense" to "native-sense." NN emends to "native sense." MEL retains the hyphen.; most of them are familiar with our naval usage and tradition; and how would they take it? Even could you explain to them——which our official position forbids——they, long moulded by arbitrary discipline have not that kind of intelligent responsivnessresponsiveness that might qualify them to comprehend and discriminate. No, to the people the foretopman's deed however it be worded in the announcement will be plain homocidehomicide committed in a flagrant act of mutiny. What penalty for that should follow, they know. But it does not follow. Why? they will ruminate. You know what sailors are. Will they not revert to the recent outbreak at the Nore? Ay. They know the well-founded alarm—the panic it struck throughout England. Your clement sentence they would account pusillanimous. They would think that we flinch, that we are afraid of them—afraid of practisingpracticing a lawful rigor singularly demanded at this juncture lest it should provoke new troubles. What shame to us such a conjecture on their part, and how deadly to discipline. You see then, whither, prompted by duty and the law I steadfastly drive. But I beeseechbeseech you, my friends, do not take me amiss. I feel as you do for this unfortunate boy. But did he know our hearts, I take him to be of that generous nature that he would feel even for us on whom in this military necessity so heavy a compulsion is laid. (no quote in MS)laid." With that, crossing the deck he resumed his place by the sashed port-hole, tacitly leaving the three to come to a decision. On the cabin's opposite side the troubled court sat silent. Loyal lieges, plain and practical, though at bottom they dissented from some points Captain Vere had put to them, they were without the faculty, hardly had the inclination to gainsay one whom they felt to be an earnest man, one too (no commas in MS)one, too, not less their superior in mind than in naval rank. But it is not improbable that even such of his words as were not without influence over them, less came home to them than his closing appeal to their instinct as sea-officers in the forethought he threw out as to the practical consequences to discipline,discipline;discipline;] Originally, Melville supplied a comma after "discipline," but a fuller stop is needed to clarify sentence structure, and MEL emends to a semi-colon. considering the unconfirmed tone of the fleet at the time, should a man-of-war's-man (no apostrophe s in MS)man's violent killing at sea of a superior in grade be allowed to pass for aught else than a capital crime.crimecrime] Originally, Melville stopped his sentence here with a period. Later, in pencil, he inserted "demanding prompt infliction of the penalty" but neglected to delete the period after "crime." A comma after "crime" would make the insertion a non-restrictive modifier, suggesting that some capital crimes might not lead to the death penalty. However, Vere's argument is that the crime inherently requires the penalty, requiring the modifier to be restrictive. MEL therefore emends with no comma at this point. demanding prompt infliction of the penalty (no period in MS)penalty. Not unlikely they were brought to something more or less akin to that harassed frame of mind which in the year 1842 actuated the Commander of the U.S. brig-of-war Somers (not underlined in MS)Somers to resolve, under the so-called Articles of War, Articles modledmodeled upon the English Mutiny Act, to resolve upon the execution at sea of a midshipman and two petty-officerstwo petty-officers] In fact the other two were a boatswain's mate and an ordinary seamen. HS and NN emend to "two sailors." MEL does not emend. as mutineers designing the seizure of the brig. Which resolution was carried out though in a time of peace and within not many daysdays' sail of home. An act vindicated by a naval court of inquiry subsequently convened ashore. History, and here cited without comment. True, the circumstances on board the Somers were different from those on board the Indomitable. But the urgency felt, well-warranted or otherwise, was much the same. Says a writer whom few know, "Forty years after a battle it is easy for a non-combatant to reason about how it ought to have been fought. It is another thing personally and under fire to have to direct the fighting while involved in the obscuring smoke of it. Much so with respect to other emergencies involving considerations both practical and moral, and when it is imperative promptly to act. The greater the fog the more it imperils the steamer, and speed is put on tho'though at the hazard of running somebody down. Little ween the snug card-players in the cabin of the responsibilities of the sleepless man on the bridge." In brief, Billy Budd was formally convicted and sentenced to be hung at the yard-arm in the early morning-watch, it being now night. Otherwise, as is customary in such cases, the sentence would forthwith have been carried out. In war-time on the field or in the fleet, a mortal punishment decreed by a drum-head court—on the field sometimes decreed by but a nod from the General—follows without delay on the heel of conviction without appeal.